Personal Introduction

Your personal introduction to your web page should be a concise and clearly worded paragraph containing information similar to that in a cover letter or a letter of introduction for a collage application.

You may have 1 of the following focuses:

1. Introduction of self, interests & activities

2. Introduction of self, future goals & plans

The focus of my introduction will be:

You will be explaining who you are; your strengths & achievements and goals. Give details. Make them specific and unique.

DO NOT use meaningless phrases like � I want to get a good job and make a lot of money,� no one wants a bad job that makes no money.

Writing

You may also wish to refer the reader to your r�sum�. If you have had experience, be sure to point out your achievements or other qualifications.

Step 1 – Brainstorm using Inspiration. Remember you must have generalizations & details

Step 2 – Export your outline to text, open it in MS Word and begin writing your introduction.

Step 3

Devise a hook or an introduction sentence (not �Hi this is my webpage�)

Possible options include

� A question

� A quote

� A startling statement or fact

Step 4

Revise for wording - Use the principles below:

* Grammar and writing must be correct in every aspect. You should project yourself as intelligent and capable

* Get to the point and be concise give details and avoid jargon, slang, and clich�s. Use facts to support your generalizations.

* Put the most relevant, impressive information first.

* Be energetic and enthusiastic these are qualities that are valued in college and the world of work.

Grading

Has a hook (step 3)	5 pts
Has at least 3 generalizations (or main points)	6 pts
Has sufficient details to support your generalization	5 pts
Details & generalizations are unique & interesting	4 pts
Paragraph has required transitions; it flows	5 pts
Paragraph has a clear end	5 pts
Total	/30